At first, my "Why Major" essay felt like a scripted sales pitch. I wrote about how I had always been fascinated by biology, but honestly, that was just fluff. What really hooked me was the day I volunteered at a local clinic and saw how much impact healthcare could have on a community.
I went back and rewrote my essay with that experience at the center. I talked about how that sparked my interest in public health and how I wanted to see tangible changes in people's lives. It became more relatable and personal, and I think that made all the difference.
So, the tip? Draw from real experiences, even if they’re messy or imperfect. It’s way more authentic and compelling.