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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 5.0 Example

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Task 1

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Ideas to explore

  • Summarise the overall pattern: the village grew substantially between 1868 and 1994.
  • Compare the stages of expansion: early development was limited, followed by growth around the centre and later in several outlying areas.
  • Mention transport changes accurately: the railway was built in 1909 and the motorway in 1970; the park and golf course remained a prominent mapped feature.

Suggested structure

  1. Introduce the map, location and time span.
  2. Give an overview of the main expansion and transport-related changes.
  3. Describe the earliest period and development up to 1922.
  4. Compare the 1922–1970 and 1970–1994 periods, including the directions of later growth.
  5. Finish with a brief summary of the village’s expansion and continuing park and golf course.
Useful vocabulary & examples
built-up area
Land covered by buildings and developed settlement.

The built-up area was limited in the earliest period.

spread around the centre
Expanded outward in places close to the central area.

Development spread around the centre between 1883 and 1922.

in several separate areas
In a number of distinct locations rather than one continuous zone.

From 1970 to 1994, development appeared in several separate areas.

transport links
Routes or services that connect places, such as railways and motorways.

The map shows the railway and motorway as important transport links.

Task Prompt

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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Band 5.0

The map illustrates the changes of infrastructure of the village of Chorleywood which is near London between 1868 and 1994. It is clear that the village has increased as a transport usage for population during more than a hundred year. At that time, the developments are categorized to three groups. First and foremost, the main development was the gradual outward growth of the built-up area. In the earliest period, from 1868 to 1883, buildings were concentrated near the centre. Between 1883 and 1922, the village expanded, especially towards the south. From 1922 to 1970, further development took place on the western and southern sides. A railway was built through the village in 1909, and Chorleywood station was located near the centre. In 1970, a motorway was constructed to the east of the built-up area, meeting a main road at a roundabout. During the final period, from 1970 to 1994, the village expanded further, with several new areas appearing to the north, east and south of the existing settlement. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course lies near the northern part of the village and remained undeveloped.

Targeted Improvement Tips

1
Replace the unclear opening overview with one direct sentence stating that Chorleywood expanded over time and that the railway and motorway were added.
2
Organise the details by the map’s four date ranges, linking each expansion stage to its location rather than repeating general statements about growth.
3
After drafting, check every time phrase and verb: use past tense for completed changes, plural “years,” and natural forms such as “divided into” and “built between.”

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