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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 4.0 Example

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182 words AcademicTask 1Map
Task 1

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Ideas to explore

  • Summarise the overall pattern: the village grew substantially between 1868 and 1994.
  • Compare the stages of expansion: early development was limited, followed by growth around the centre and later in several outlying areas.
  • Mention transport changes accurately: the railway was built in 1909 and the motorway in 1970; the park and golf course remained a prominent mapped feature.

Suggested structure

  1. Introduce the map, location and time span.
  2. Give an overview of the main expansion and transport-related changes.
  3. Describe the earliest period and development up to 1922.
  4. Compare the 1922–1970 and 1970–1994 periods, including the directions of later growth.
  5. Finish with a brief summary of the village’s expansion and continuing park and golf course.
Useful vocabulary & examples
built-up area
Land covered by buildings and developed settlement.

The built-up area was limited in the earliest period.

spread around the centre
Expanded outward in places close to the central area.

Development spread around the centre between 1883 and 1922.

in several separate areas
In a number of distinct locations rather than one continuous zone.

From 1970 to 1994, development appeared in several separate areas.

transport links
Routes or services that connect places, such as railways and motorways.

The map shows the railway and motorway as important transport links.

Task Prompt

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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Band 4.0

The map illustrates the infrastructural improvements of the Chorleywood village that situated near London, whose residents have been increasing in the middle of the 19th century. In general, the transport system categorized into three groups; main roads, motorway, and a rail station. Each group was built at around 126 years in different parts of the village. Overall, the built-up area expanded from a small western cluster to several zones beside the transport routes. In 1868–1883, development was limited to a small area west of the future station, close to a main road. By 1883–1922, building had spread around this central area. The railway, built in 1909, passed through the village, and its station was located near the centre. From 1922 to 1970, development grew substantially on both sides of the railway, especially west and south of the station. The motorway was built in 1970, crossing the northern and eastern parts of the map. In 1970–1994, new areas appeared farther north and east, as well as south of the railway. Overall, later growth was more widely distributed than earlier development.

Targeted Improvement Tips

1
Replace the opening overview with a concise summary of the settlement’s expansion and the transport routes; do not imply that all three routes were built during the full 126-year period.
2
Describe the map’s settlement periods in chronological order, linking each development area to a clear location such as west or south of the station.
3
Proofread for complete clauses and accurate time expressions, especially missing forms of “be” and the distinction between “for” and “since.”

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