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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 8.0 Example

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Task 1

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Ideas to explore

  • Identify what stayed constant: the stage, auditorium, fourteen chairs and central main entrance.
  • Track the storage room’s relocation from the left side in 2010 to the right side in 2012.
  • Compare the supporting rooms: the 2010 media room and café give way to a different arrangement including a hall, showers and restaurants in 2012.

Suggested structure

  1. Introduce the two dates and the place shown.
  2. Give an overview of the main features that remain and the overall scale of change.
  3. Compare the upper and side areas, including the media room, hall, showers and storage.
  4. Describe the lower rooms and note the café/restaurant and ticket-office changes.
  5. Finish with the features that remain in the same position.
Useful vocabulary & examples
remain in the same position
to stay in the same location in both plans

The auditorium remained in the same position in both years.

be relocated to
to be moved to a different place

The media room was relocated to the left side of the theater.

be replaced by
to be removed and have something else put in its place

The café was replaced by a restaurant area.

occupy the upper area
to be situated in the top section of a plan

The hall occupied the upper area in 2012.

Task Prompt

The plans below show a theater in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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User Essay Analysis

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Band 8.0

The maps illustrate the changes of a small theater layout over a 2-year period between 2010 and 2012. Looking from an overall perspective, it is clear that the layout of the theater witnessed remarkable developments. Most noticeably, the expansion on the two sides and the introduction of the restaurants. As observed, on the right of the auditorium in 2010 was a café, while by 2012 this area had become the ticket office. The ticket office, which had originally been at the lower left, was moved to the lower right. The administration office also changed position: it was in the lower-left corner in 2010, but in 2012 it was placed directly above the new restaurant area. The main entrance remained at the bottom centre in both plans.

The central performance spaces were largely retained. The stage and auditorium remained in the same sequence, with the auditorium below the stage, and the number and arrangement of chairs appear unchanged. However, the media room was repositioned from above the stage to a narrow space on the upper-left side. A hall was added above the stage, while storage was moved to the upper-right corner; showers were also added on the left side below the media room. Overall, the theater gained several facilities and saw changes to its side rooms, while its main seating and entrance stayed in place.

Targeted Improvement Tips

1
Replace the claim of “expansion” with a precise overview of the additions, relocations, and features that stayed in place.
2
Group the comparisons by area: first the upper and central rooms, then the offices, restaurant area, and entrance.
3
Proofread sentence boundaries, especially the overview, to ensure that every sentence contains a complete clause.

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