Writing Academic Task 1 Band 7.0 Example

The blueprints illustrate the modification of a small performance venue in 2010 and 2012. Taking a board view, there are some notable features including the relocations and renovations of almost all facilities except for the auditorium. In the meanwhile, the construction of a new area in place of the old one is also noteworthy. In 2010, media occupied the upper part of the building, above the stage, while storage was on the left. The auditorium lay below the stage, with 12 chairs. At the bottom, the admin and ticket offices were on the left, a café was on the right, and the main entrance was in the middle.

By 2012, the stage and auditorium remained in the central area, although the auditorium contained 14 chairs. The media room had moved to the left side, and storage was relocated to the upper right. A hall replaced the media room above the stage, while showers were added beside the auditorium. At the lower left, the admin office was joined by restaurants, whereas the ticket office shifted to the lower right. The café was no longer shown, but the entrance remained central. Overall, facilities were rearranged and new amenities introduced, while the main performance spaces retained their basic arrangement.