Why constantly off-topics!!!!?

IELTS

Yes, Why?

For example, the task requires talking about whether to add computer skills to a general education system, when there are mainly reading, writing and maths?

The outline goes:

Stance: partly agree, should be added to the curricula, but it should not take as much part as other subjects.

P1: In a technology-driven society, computer skills prepare students well for careers. and explain blah blah

P2: Not all job positions strictly require computer proficiency. Computer skills are a product of modern society, temporary and not transferable. Other subjects develop skills that influence all aspects of life.

P3: can add computer skills to education, but most of the time should be focused on traditional subjects.

Is this off-topic?

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