Part 3 · Band 6

Why might some adults find it difficult to learn a new skill?

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Target Band 6 · Original model answer

One reason is that adults have less free time. They may have a full-time job and a family, so it is hard to attend a class every week. Some people also feel nervous about starting again because they have not studied for many years. I think flexible courses could help them.

Answer analysis

Language

Mostly clear simple structures and relevant vocabulary communicate the answer.

Development

The answer explains time pressure and adds confidence as a second barrier; a concrete example would deepen it.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer identifies time and confidence barriers and proposes flexibility. The link between a weekly class and actual practice could be developed more clearly. Explain how a flexible course would help, for example by allowing shorter regular sessions, while keeping the existing family and work example. This is a planning guide from text, not an assessment of recorded fluency. Record one continuous answer, mark where the main idea changes, and check that each pause supports a thought group rather than interrupting a phrase.

Lexical Resource

The wording “less free time” communicates a clear idea, and the answer stays within the actual topic. This avoids an unstated comparison and keeps the intended meaning. The alternative “little spare time” is a refinement, not evidence that the original wording is wrong. Keep specific examples and do not substitute unfamiliar formal words merely to make the answer sound advanced.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The response uses controlled sentence structures to explain the idea. “starting again” is grammatical in context; this specifies what the adult is beginning again. Read the suggested version “returning to study” in the complete sentence and check its reference to the previous point. There is no reason to invent agreement or tense mistakes in this transcript.

Pronunciation

No recording is available, so pronunciation cannot be scored. This practice guide uses “less free time” and “starting again” from the transcript: underline the words carrying the main contrast, then speak each phrase as a thought group. Record the full answer and compare whether those words stand out naturally. Use a dictionary recording to check the stress of any unfamiliar word before repeating the answer.

A transcript shows language and organisation. Fluency, delivery and pronunciation require an audio recording; the synthetic voice demonstrates the text, not the original speaker.

  • Keep the concrete example and its connection to the question rather than replacing it with a memorised introduction.
  • Try the two optional phrasing alternatives and choose the ones that feel natural when spoken.
  • Record the answer, identify its main contrast or benefit, and check that your emphasis makes that relationship clear.

Plan your answer

Try your own response before reading the samples.

Ideas to explore

  • Consider time, confidence and access rather than blaming age alone.
  • Explain one barrier and distinguish it from ability.
  • Qualify generalisations and suggest a realistic change.

Suggested structure

  1. Give a main reason.
  2. Explain how it creates a barrier.
  3. Add a contrasting or qualifying point.
Useful vocabulary & examples
little spare time
an alternative way to express the main idea

One reason is that adults often have little spare time. A full-time job and family responsibilities can make it difficult to attend a weekly class or practise between lessons. Some also feel nervous about studying again after a long break. Flexible courses could help them fit regular practice around those commitments.

returning to study
a more precise expression for the supporting point

One reason is that adults often have little spare time. A full-time job and family responsibilities can make it difficult to attend a weekly class or practise between lessons. Some also feel nervous about studying again after a long break. Flexible courses could help them fit regular practice around those commitments.

rather than
expresses a contrast between two alternatives

The explanation should develop the point rather than repeat it.

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