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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 8.0 Example
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Ideas to explore
- Compare which series begins higher and which one ends higher; here, production starts slightly above consumption, but consumption finishes much higher.
- Identify the different rates of change: production rises gradually, while consumption accelerates after the early plotted years.
- Mention the axis-label problem: the task’s stated dates do not match the displayed years, and the last year is printed twice.
Suggested structure
- Introduce the graph, measures, and units.
- Give an overview of the overall direction and the main contrast between the two lines.
- Describe production’s starting level, plateau, and gradual later rise.
- Describe consumption’s early stability and sharper increase, then compare the final plotted values.
- Briefly note that the displayed dates are inconsistent or duplicated where this affects interpretation.
Useful vocabulary & examples
- rose gradually
- increased slowly over time
Oil production rose gradually after remaining near 3 million barrels per day.
- remained stable
- stayed at approximately the same level
Production remained stable at around 3 million barrels per day for a period.
- increased substantially
- went up by a large amount
Consumption increased substantially and reached about 6.3 million barrels per day at the final plotted point.
- the gap widened
- the difference between two values became greater
The gap between oil consumption and production widened as consumption climbed.
Task Prompt

User Essay Analysis
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The line graph illustrates the trends in oil production and consumption in China from 1982 to 2006, measured in millions of barrels per day. Overall, both production and consumption exhibit an upward trajectory, with consumption significantly outpacing production in the later years. In 1982, China’s oil production stood at 2 million barrels per day, showing the starting point for a subsequent modest rise. It then climbed to approximately 3 million barrels per day by 1986 and remained close to this figure through the early 1990s. Production increased only gradually thereafter, reaching about 3.5 million barrels per day at the end of the period.
Consumption, by contrast, began at just under 2 million barrels per day and changed little in the first few years. From the early 1990s, however, it rose much more rapidly: it was around 3.3 million barrels per day in 1994, 4 million in 1998, and 5 million in 2002. By 2006, consumption had reached approximately 6.3 million barrels per day.
Thus, the two measures started at similar levels, but their paths diverged markedly after the early 1990s. While production increased by roughly 1.5 million barrels per day overall, consumption more than tripled and finished nearly 3 million barrels per day higher than production.
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