Fluency & Coherence
The answer moves from a general claim to examples of phones and TVs, then to communication between countries, before repeating the opening idea. This gives it a basic progression, but the final sentence adds no new development, and the relationship between TVs and direct communication is unclear. For practice, speak for 45 seconds using this sequence: main change, phone example, cross-country contact, brief conclusion; record yourself and check that each point adds something.
Lexical Resource
The answer uses relevant everyday vocabulary, including “phones and TVs” and “from one country to another,” so the topic is clear. However, “people communicate with each other” is repeated, and “more technologies” is less natural than a phrase such as “a wider range of technology.” To extend your range, practise precise topic phrases such as “keep in touch across borders” and use each phrase in a sentence about a distinct effect of technology.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
You produce clear simple and joined clauses, for example, “people now use their phones to communicate with each other from one country to another.” The main limitation is that the structures remain similar, with repeated use of “people” and “technology has changed.” The wording is generally understandable; a useful next step is to combine a reason and contrast in one sentence, while checking that pronouns such as “it” have a clear reference.
Pronunciation
Pronunciation cannot be assessed from this text, so this is a practice guide, not an assessment of a recording. Practise the word stress in “technology” (tek-NOL-o-gy) and “communicate” (com-MU-ni-cate). Group the phrase “from one country to another” as one thought group, then pause briefly before your next point. Record a spoken version, listen back, and check that the stressed syllables and phrase boundaries are clear.
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