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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 7.0 Example

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Task 1

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  • Agriculture is the largest global water-use sector across the displayed period, rising to about 3,000 km³ by 2000.
  • Industrial and domestic use both increase over time, but remain below agricultural use; industry ends at roughly 1,400 km³ and domestic use at about 500 km³.
  • In 2000, Brazil exceeds the Democratic Republic of Congo in population, irrigated land and per-person water consumption; the per-person figures are 359 m³ and 8 m³ respectively.

Suggested structure

  1. Introduce the line graph and table, including their subject and time point.
  2. Give an overview of the dominant global sector and the main country contrast.
  3. Describe the global trend, comparing agriculture, industry and domestic use from the start to the end of the period.
  4. Summarise the table by comparing population, irrigated land and per-person consumption.
Useful vocabulary & examples
per-person consumption
The amount used by each individual on average.

Per-person water consumption was 359 m³ in Brazil.

irrigated land
Land supplied with water artificially to support crop growth.

Brazil had 26,500 km² of irrigated land.

rose from … to …
A concise way to describe an increase between two figures.

Agricultural water use rose from about 500 km³ to approximately 3,000 km³.

remained the smallest category
Continued to be the lowest of the compared groups.

Domestic use remained the smallest category in the graph.

Task Prompt

The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.
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Band 7.0

The line graph illustrates three sectors in terms of the amount of water that they used in the world between 1900 and 2000, while the table gives information about water expenditure in two countries ( Brazil and Congo) in 2000. Units are measured in km³ and m³ respectively. Overall, the global water rose significantly in the period shown, with agriculture remaining the largest user throughout. Water use also increased in industry and homes, although both sectors used much less than agriculture by 2000. Brazil recorded higher figures than the Democratic Republic of Congo in all three categories shown in the table.

Agricultural water use rose from about 500 km³ in 1900 to approximately 3,000 km³ in 2000. The increase was gradual at first, then became steeper in the later decades. Industrial use also climbed, from roughly 100 km³ at the start to around 1,300 km³ by 2000, with much of its growth occurring after 1970. Domestic use followed a similar but smaller upward trend, reaching about 500 km³ at the end of the period.

In Brazil, the population was 176 million and 26,500 km² of land was irrigated; water consumption per person was 359 m³. By comparison, the Democratic Republic of Congo had a population of 5.2 million, only 100 km² of irrigated land and per-person consumption of 8 m³.

Targeted Improvement Tips

1
Replace “water expenditure” with “water consumption” and use “the Democratic Republic of Congo” when introducing the table.
2
Write an overview that compares the largest sector with the other two and also states the main Brazil–Congo contrast.
3
Check each chart unit and measure explicitly: use km³ for the global graph and m³ per person for the table.

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