Fluency & Coherence
The ideas follow a clear sequence: your current status, when you began working, your first job, and your present employer. The final sentence answers the question directly, though it repeats the opening idea rather than adding a new detail. For practice, give this answer in 30 seconds, then use the remaining time to add one relevant detail about what you value in your work, without introducing facts that are not true.
Lexical Resource
The answer uses relevant career vocabulary, including “international relations officer” and “Office of the Narcotics Control Board,” which makes your work history specific. However, “a personal job” is unclear in this context, and “working at” is less natural for describing employment with an organisation. Next, practise collocations such as “get another job” and “work for an organisation,” choosing wording that matches your exact meaning.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
You use past simple for a completed period—“I was there for two years”—and present perfect for your continuing employment—“I've been with the Office.” These forms communicate the timeline effectively. The opening, “since I was 21 after graduation,” is awkwardly ordered, and “that I'm working at right now” is wordy. Practise combining the time reference as “after graduating, when I was 21” and simplifying the current-job clause.
Pronunciation
This text-only response cannot establish how you pronounce the words, so this is a practice guide, not an assessment of a recording. Try stressing the main content words in “international relations officer” and “Narcotics Control Board,” then group the opening into “I’ve been working / since I was 21 / after graduation.” Record yourself once, check that each phrase is easy to understand, and repeat any unclear word slowly.
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