Target Band 9 · Original model answer
181 words · Illustrative target bandDear Sam, I wanted to say a proper thank-you for helping me move last Saturday. I honestly do not know how I would have managed those heavy boxes without you, especially with the lift out of order. Staying to help put the shelves together was incredibly kind as well. I am gradually getting settled. Most of the boxes are unpacked, and the living room finally looks like somewhere I can relax rather than a storage roo…
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