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Writing Academic Task 1 Band 6.0 Example

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Task 1

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Ideas to explore

  • Describe the overall shift from scientific research to tourism before listing individual map features.
  • Compare what stayed the same (the pier, beach, natural spring and rocks) with what was added or replaced.
  • Group details by location: the western pier and beach, the central hotel and leisure facilities, and the eastern spring, rocks and lookout.

Suggested structure

  1. Introduce what the two maps compare.
  2. Give an overview of the island’s main change and any notable features that remain.
  3. Describe the past layout, moving from west to east.
  4. Describe the present layout in the same order and compare new facilities with former features.
Useful vocabulary & examples
be transformed into
to change substantially into a different kind of place or thing

Paradise Island has been transformed into a popular tourist destination.

remain in place
to continue to exist in the same location

The natural spring and the rocks remain in place on the eastern side.

be replaced by
to give way to something new in the same position or role

The small boat was replaced by a cruise ship.

inland from
away from the coast and towards the interior

The hotel complex is located inland from the beach.

Task Prompt

The diagram below show the condition of paradise island in the past and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Band 6.0

The maps illustrated the layout of Paraside Island in the past and present. From an overall perspective, the island has noticeably turned from a remote area to a vacation venue, which undergone deforestation and welcomed the urban development of amenities, restaurants and infrastructures throughout the timeframe. In the previous years, Paradise Island represented natural elements such as a beach, a pier, a boat, several palm trees, a scientific research station, a natural spring and rocks. The sea surrounded the island, and there were no visitor facilities apart from the pier and boat. In the present-day map, the island has been substantially developed for tourism. The beach remains and is now marked as suitable for swimming, while the old pier has been retained and a cruise ship is shown nearby. A hotel complex and swimming pool have been added in the central-western area, with an open restaurant, a BBQ area and a café further east. A cycle path runs around much of the island and connects the developed areas. There is also a scenic lookout near the rocks in the northeast. The natural spring and rocks remain, although the palm trees and research station are no longer shown. Overall, Paradise Island has changed from a largely natural setting with a small research presence into a resort, while some natural features have been preserved.

Targeted Improvement Tips

1
Rewrite the overview in two short clauses: state the shift to tourism, then mention that the spring and rocks remain.
2
Separate past and present details, and compare each retained feature with its change or nearby addition where relevant.
3
Check place-name spelling, verb auxiliaries and uncountable nouns such as “infrastructure” before submitting.

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