Task 2 · · 18 samples

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantage and disadvantage of giving children this message.

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Ideas to explore

  • The main advantage is that the message gives children a reason to practise.
  • The message can also help children respond constructively to setbacks.
  • The disadvantage is the word anything.

Suggested structure

  1. Give a direct introduction and state the required position.
  2. Explain the first side or reason with a relevant example.
  3. Address the second side and the conditions that limit the claim.
  4. Return to the precise question in the conclusion.
Useful vocabulary & examples
persistence
continuing despite difficulty

This teaches persistence alongside judgement.

an unrealistic promise
an assurance that ignores real limits

Telling children that effort can achieve anything can motivate them, but the promise is too absolute. The advantages concern persistence, while the disadvantages arise when children mistake effort for a guarantee.

constructive feedback
guidance that identifies how to improve

Telling children that effort can achieve anything can motivate them, but the promise is too absolute. The advantages concern persistence, while the disadvantages arise when children mistake effort for a guarantee.

Sample answers

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Convincing children that hard work is the key to success is popular in many nations. It can be profitable as it gives them the motivation to work hard and encourages them to chase their dreams. However, it has many negative consequences also. To begin with, this message is beneficial to the young generation in several ways, particularly by encouraging practice. The main advantage is that the message gives children a…

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Nowadays, in some states, may pupils have been told that the most effective approach to persuade them to achieve the aim is to try as much as possible while some claim that trying hard on their duties can provide several disadvantages to them. I believe that there are both pros and cons of giving this message rather than treating effort as a guarantee. The main advantage is that the message gives children a reason t…

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In several cultures, parents are accustomed to tell their offspring that they can accomplish anything as long as they work hard.I believe there is nothing wrong in encouraging children to be a hardworker and to have confidence in what they do. However, overconfident can often make children feel discouraged if their dreams don’t come true. Encouragement needs realistic limits. The main advantage is that the message g…

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