Task 2 · · 18 samples

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantage and disadvantage of giving children this message.

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Ideas to explore

  • The main advantage is that the message gives children a reason to practise.
  • The message can also help children respond constructively to setbacks.
  • The disadvantage is the word anything.

Suggested structure

  1. Give a direct introduction and state the required position.
  2. Explain the first side or reason with a relevant example.
  3. Address the second side and the conditions that limit the claim.
  4. Return to the precise question in the conclusion.
Useful vocabulary & examples
persistence
continuing despite difficulty

This teaches persistence alongside judgement.

an unrealistic promise
an assurance that ignores real limits

Telling children that effort can achieve anything can motivate them, but the promise is too absolute. The advantages concern persistence, while the disadvantages arise when children mistake effort for a guarantee.

constructive feedback
guidance that identifies how to improve

Telling children that effort can achieve anything can motivate them, but the promise is too absolute. The advantages concern persistence, while the disadvantages arise when children mistake effort for a guarantee.

Sample answers

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In some nations, it is highly prevalent that adults encourage their children to work hard in order to become successful in any target. While this approach can be beneficial for children, there are some side effects that should not be ignored. Raising children’s awareness about the significant importance of being determined for achieving any goal can encourage useful practice. The main advantage is that the message g…

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In some cultures, children are frequently told that they can accomplish any ambition they hold, provided they work hard enough. Although this encouragement may help some children succeed, it also creates an unrealistic ideology that may result in negative consequences. Children often need to be motivated to achieve various goals. Without words of encouragement and support, some may give up after a setback. The main …

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In the first place, I would disagree with the premise that „in some cultures” hardworking is instilled into children’s heads from the beginning of their lives. On the contrary, this message is very popular around the globe and, at first sight, may seem logical and correct. However, it contains many drawbacks that, theoretically, can negatively affect a child who cannot reach an unrealistic goal. The main advantage i…

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