Target Band 5 · Original model answer
I want to talk about cooking. My sister teach me cooking when I moved to a flat. Before this I cannot cook much. I eat sandwiches and food from shops. My sister is good at cooking and she say I should learn. She came to my flat on a Sunday and showed me making soup. We buy carrots and potatoes and some beans. First she cut vegetables and then I cut some too. It was difficult because I was slow. She put everything in a pot and I watch it. Then we wait and the soup was ready. After this I tried alone. The first time it was not very good because there was too much water. My sister tell me to use less water. Now I can make soup and pasta. I cook two or three times in a week. It is useful because food from shops is expensive and I do not want eat it every day. I also cook for friends sometimes and they like it. So I am happy my sister helped me.