Writing Academic Task 1 Band 4.0 Example

The bar graph depicts the proportion of Australian people who did regular physical activity according to their age groups in the period of 2010. Overall, it is apparent from the provided information that, the proportion of female were more engaged in outdoor activities compared to men in the period fo time. Getting into details portrayed in the bar chart, the figures for men and women are shown in six age groups. In the 15 to 24 group, men had about 53%, while women were about 48%. But in the 25 to 34 group, women were about 49% and men about 42%. For ages 35 to 44, females were around 52%, and males were near 39%. This is a big difference. In the 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 groups, the female percentage was almost the same, at about 53%. The male figure was 43% for ages 45 to 54 and 45% for ages 55 to 64. For people aged 65 and over, the two figures were close, with women at about 47% and men at about 46%. The highest rate for men was in the youngest group, but their lowest rate was for ages 35 to 44. For women, the lowest was in the 15 to 24 group, and their activity was highest in the middle age groups. So women did regular exercise more than men in most age groups, except the youngest group.