Writing Academic Task 1 Band 4.0 Example

The graph presents the proportion of Australian male and female of varied age groups engaging in daily exercise in 2010. Overall, it is apparent from the graph that the percentage of women doing physical activity were higher than men in various age group, rather than that of adult groups. Getting into details, more than a half of men in the 15 to 24 age group did regular exercise, at about 52%, while women was lower, at around 48%. In the next age group, women reached almost 49%, compared with 42% for men. The biggest difference can be seen among people aged 35 to 44, where female figure was about 52%, but male was around 39%. For people from 45 to 54, women had approximately 53% and men about 43%. A similar result was for the 55 to 64 group, with 53% of women and 45% of men doing activity. At the last group, 65 and over, the percentages were almost same, at about 47% for both sexes. In general, women was more active than men in most age groups, but the young group was an exception. Men's rate went down from first group to 35 to 44, then increased gradually in older groups. Female rate increased slightly and stay stable after 45.